Documentary Rough Cut: Audience Feedback

Here is my rough cut:

Here is my audience feedback regarding my rough cut:

Positive: 

• Good Concert Footage 
• Good Interview Location (posters in background link to the interviews and content)
• Good Interview shots (interviews shots from different perspectives)
• Good use of logo at the end
• Looks fairly professional

Recommendations:

• Some audio issues at the start (slight lag)
  Statistics could be split up over the whole Documentary 
• Cut out interview questions being asked
• More cutaways during the interviews
• Emphasis on being first 5 minutes
• Get rid of credits
• Could use footage of friend at the concert
• One concert clip needs scaling/getting rid of (it's smaller than the rest)
• Possibly use title questions